From: Eric Wong <e@80x24.org>
Date: Sat, 2 Jul 2016 22:57:29 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: wwwstream: wording/grammar tweaks in trailer
X-Git-Tag: v1.0.0~316
X-Git-Url: http://www.git.stargrave.org/?p=public-inbox.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=bfd60ef4c2eff566481f1e40b18b7c3d1b3e43fa

wwwstream: wording/grammar tweaks in trailer

git.git documentation uses "clonable" so that's probably
a better term than "clone-able".  Also, shorten the section
for retrieving our code and remove an obvious typo.
---

diff --git a/lib/PublicInbox/WwwStream.pm b/lib/PublicInbox/WwwStream.pm
index be6ce2e6..285416d5 100644
--- a/lib/PublicInbox/WwwStream.pm
+++ b/lib/PublicInbox/WwwStream.pm
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ sub _html_top ($) {
 
 sub _html_end {
 	my ($self) = @_;
-	my $urls = 'Archives are clone-able:';
+	my $urls = 'Archives are clonable:';
 	my $ctx = $self->{ctx};
 	my $obj = $ctx->{-inbox};
 	my $desc = ascii_html($obj->description);
@@ -81,8 +81,8 @@ sub _html_end {
 	'<pre>'.join("\n",
 		'- ' . $desc,
 		$urls,
-		'Archived served using code from public-inbox:',
-		qq(\tgit clone <a\nhref="$url">$url</a> public-inbox),
+		'Served with public-inbox: '.
+		qq(git clone <a\nhref="$url">$url</a> public-inbox),
 	).'</pre></body></html>';
 }